Argh.

I actually wanted to add a few "adult" sentences into my RP post that comes after Dianne's. I ran it by her, and we both thought it was too explicit for a cartoon made for kids. So, I took it out.

Weird. It hurts me to do that, though. No, not cuz of the adult stuff. But because the adult sentence showed the hidden character of John that had been shaped by years living in a slam. I didn't want him to be too mellow, but wished for him to respect Jas, yet show his coarseness at the same time.

*sigh* Taking away that sentence felt as if I took away part of John, part of *myself*. :(

Okay, here's the things:

(Dianne wrote this part)
"Ain't those infrared glasses great?" he asked jocularly. "Too bad you can't see too well when there's a light on." He looked her up and down again. "You're a nice looking babe. Been a long time since I've had a nice looking bit o' skirt. Tell you what, babe. You give me what I want, and I won't ghost the kid." He moved closer. "I'm sure
you understand me. You look like an intelligent skirt. All it would take for me to kill the kid is to do... this!" He made like he was pulling Quentin's head violently to the side. Jas gasped, then her eyes narrowed as she realized she'd been tricked.

"Seriously. I'll kill him in a heartbeat if you don't give me what I've been longing for, dreaming about for three long years. So, babe? What's it gonna be? Do we get it on? Or do I kill the kid?"

(My part)
"Too bad I didn't get her, *John*. Your woman, I mean. She would've made good company for a few nights."

"Jas doesn't spread her legs for anyone she doesn't want to, and not for the likes of you."

We both thought the 2nd sentence was too explicit for a kids' cartoon. So, yeah...took out that 2nd one. :(